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From: Simon Clubley <clubley@remove_me.eisner.decus.org-Earth.UFP>
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Subject: Re: GetAdaNow.com
Date: Sun, 23 Nov 2014 09:28:08 +0000 (UTC)
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On 2014-11-23, David Botton <david@botton.com> wrote:
> As part of the effort to start advocating Ada to the Applications space, I've set up a new website:
>
> http://GetAdaNow.com
>
> The page is designed to make it as easy as currently possible to get
> new developers set up to use Ada and pointed to some updated
> resources.
>
> If you have any suggestions please let me know.
>

The first paragraph does not flow correctly to me while reading it.
Try replacing the full stop at the end of the first sentence with
"with" so it reads:

|Get started writing software in the most advanced yet easily learned
|programming language in the world with Ada, the time-tested, safe and
|secure programming language used for long-lived critical application
|development

OTOH, that may be a bit long by a few words so I'll let others make some
suggestions of their own, but with the current wording it comes across
as "not flowing" to me.

Also, it should be "advanced" not "advance" in the first sentence
(which I corrected above).

Even with Javascript enabled, I still have to scroll down a full page
of white space to get to step 2. If you want to keep the white space
try adding an internal link at the end of step 1 to jump to the
next step.

It's not spelt "informoation". :-) (Step 2, GNU/Linux)

Simon.

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